Hey, I really enjoyed your story. I think your writing got better as the story went along :)

Looking forward to reading your other stories!

Amazing story!

-soghs and crys- I DON'T WANT IT TO BE THE END OF THE STORY!

An awesome end to an awesome story! You should be spectacularly PROUD of what you have written.

I wonder if the Minako/Ami/Makoto will ever get with those boys? ...

I got chucked out of the bedroom by my hubby for a chapter that you say was BLAND? Either I've lost the plot in life and think EVERYTHING is hysterical like some loony (my hubby always did think I was a bit crazy and needed white padded walls at times though for completely different reasons :P) or you are in serious need of more insight into your own writing lol :D

I loved how you paired each of the girls with their so called 'perfect match' but each match turned into more like a early 'Mamoru and Usagi' type of relationship with everyone butting heads LOL AWESOME! Pure Awesomeness!

Ok this isn't a normal review for me but it cracked me up to no ends. I found a typo that I couldn't stop laughing at!

'She had beef with Taka, and nothing was really settled.'

I'm really sorry but i found it really funny :S

It is nice to see that Mamoru has some what put the past behind him and is now not hostile towards Taka which of course is great for the group chemistry as well as for Rei and Taka's as well :)

Damn it GIRL! I'm a sucker for happy endings. THAT was very sweet but also very steamy! I LOVED IT!

'Quick warning, you're ALL going to hate me after this chapter. You'll want my head, trust me! ' '

I actually think that the story called for this kind of tension in thier relationship other wise everything would seem TOO perfect in thier relationship. No relationship is perfect all the time. Because it IS a NEW relationship it is reasonable that both parties are both still a little insecure in that relationship. Even if they had something on the moon, that was a different life time ago (like the story keeps mentioning). Its a differnt time, different place, They are different to an extent. It was a great addition to the story in my book :)

'"Is everything alright?" Taka asked when he came into the dinning room to see the girls huddled tightly in a strange circle. Surprised, the girls quickly turned and laughed uncontrollably'

My hubby came home while I was saying:

"oh don't worry thier just talking about you behind your back in your own house!"

to the line above that I was just reading and all he could say was:

'Typical Hun! -chuckle-'

Talking/commenting on what I'm reading is a bad habbit of mine. If I read something that causes me to think about it or causes a strong emotion. He always teases me for it but only coz he takes it as a sign that what I'm reading I must really be enjoying.

WOW now that I've bored you silly with my EXTREMELY LONG review I think I'll read the next chapter :P

You must be getting sick of my reviews by now LOL

First I feel compelled to meet your 'challenge' hilariously 'But for those who remember your first time, proudly announce when it was!' as it was 6 years ago today in fact LOL

Now a couple of my favorite bits -giggles wile hoping that my hubby wont be anywhere near this embarrassing for our daughter in 13 years- :

'Kenji was about to rush over and grab his daughter back when Ikuko grabbed him by the collar. He struggled to take out his famous 'do not feed the usagi' sign, but she hit him over the head with it.'

'Not even the loud muffled screams from her father being strangled by his wife, could bother them now.'

Gosh i really hope he isn't embarrassing like Kenji other wise he will be getting similar treatment to Kenji LOL

I Think Kenji's reactions are my favorite out of any of the characters to everything that has been happening.

STILL LOVING YOUR STORY MORE AND MORE!

OMG! -rolls on the floor laughing like a lunatic!-

'Fun chapter? LOL I hope you guys liked it. I thought this might cut some of that crazy 'Moon death' tension and get the story back on track. -'

I can't believe more than half of the chapter was dedicated to that conversations ... IT WAS SENSATIONAL! in all meaning of the word LOL

Though I do wish i hadn't read it during my daughters afternoon sleep ... she is a light sleeper and once she wakes up in the afternoon she wont go back to sleep till night -sigh-

ANOTHER fabulous chapter!

DAMN I'm glad that i read this chapter during the day! My hubby would have LOCKED me out of the house for laughing so hard while he was trying to sleep :P

I love how you have mimiced the bus scene in the manga to a point. That was GREAT! INSPIRED!

"Oh ballroom dancing, how pleasantly unknown to us before you had just mentioned it a few seconds ago, which we didn't know about at all because you just mentioned it to us for the first time right now; this very moment, in this arcade; just now..." Makoto said trying to recover from her babbling. The girls all nervously twitched thinking about Makoto's secret keeping skills

"Usagi-chan, you're doing great. Don't forget to ask your 'Father' about the 'Question' you had about how 'He' knew about your 'True' passion for 'Moon' cakes." Minako blurted out.

Right well I have now been told by hubby that I'm -holds forefinger and thumb really close- this close to being shuffled out of the house onto the veranda if I don't stop laughing LOL

I'm totally and completely entertained both with the humor and romance sides of this story!

You just keep making me laugh LOL I've been banished from the bedroom by my hubby :P

LMAO! I was reading this chapter in bed and was laughing so hard that I woke both my hubby and bub up even while trying very hard not to :P Awesome, simply awesome!

i don't think i have ever laughed so hard in my life, my eyes are watering.