Love it! Well, it's sad, but love it anyway! The way you write emotions is great, and I could definitely imagine Kira and Hinamori having a conversation like that.

It's kind of ironic that, no matter how despairing the overtones of this maybe, we know she eventually makes it through.

Ah, this is heartbreaking and beautiful, and it's a very realistic look at Izuru's relationship with Momo, the way she is, and how he feels about everything. THANK YOU for not making him into a wibbling fool. THANK YOU for preserving everything that is wonderful about Kira and the dynamic between these two characters.

I just realized I never reviewed this story. Sorry! And then I felt extra bad when I saw there was only one review. That's odd. It's really good! And very in character.

Oh, Hinamori. I feel bad for you, I really really do. You don't deserve this. Aizen, you... Arg. *shakes fist* And poor Kira. :(

I like this. Very good Canon!Kira. Poor Hinamori...