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-Hime-Devine
2009-11-16 . chapter 7
I absolutely love your style. It's short and to the point, but you give Kaene [lol spelling.] so much character and you make her come to life. I love how you get so much out, and despite the 'short' chapters there is a lot you're telling. I can't wait to read more!
Nyx405
2009-11-10 . chapter 7
ah it's a good story, it's nice seeing Yako's friend POV of how she sees Yako and Neuro and stuff, keep writing it's good and I hope things work out for you in college. Also, don't give up on anime/manga we both know it's awesome and can give us the inspiration to go on with life...eh...uh...sorry I didn't mean to rant on like that. Anyway keep writing.
Dragons redemption
2009-11-01 . chapter 7
cool, is she going to find out about the demon factor in all this?
MikariStar
2009-10-31 . chapter 7
I'm glad you continued this story. Kanae is really trying her best to protect Yako, but things are far more complicated than she thinks. I like where this is going involving the agency, I wonder how Neuro will react to that.
xXxblacklilyxXx
2009-10-26 . chapter 7
Every time you release a new chapter, i just have to start reading the whole story again, it so awesome, i love your style!
Schermionie
2009-10-25 . chapter 7
You must be going through a hard time with so much to do -- thanks so much for keeping going with everything. This is such a unique story, and it sure has taken a turn for the dramatic, I knew Kanae would eventually decide to take action... I am enjoying it very much, but don't feel rushed on my part. Just know you have a fan who is willing to wait whatever time for an update. ^_^
Thunderstorm101
2009-10-25 . chapter 7
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I get the feeling that Neuro's realizing that Kanae's trouble...

Thanks for the update. It's been a while!
crystalgardian
2009-10-24 . chapter 7
O.O This story is very short and yet... intense...
kyri12
2009-10-18 . chapter 6
ok this is pretty good. but maybe write longer chapters and do u think its possible for u to write neuro and yakos alone time? like what happens when its just with them? or is it all just going to be in her friends view? well anyway i really do like this story especially neuro being concerned about her. but still... longer chapters! its such a tease i tell ya! <3
xXxblacklilyxXx
2009-10-10 . chapter 6
please continue this and update soon since it seems as though you've dropped this Pretty please? Your style so unique and engaging, I've only read a few fanfics from Kanae's point of view, an yours is one of the best by far!
please, I've really enjoyed it! I'm putting it on alert and favouriting it just in case you do update! *wink*
T. Omato
2009-08-14 . chapter 6
Oh gosh, this is story still going to go on? I-it's so cute augh, I love this outer perspective, as well as the refreshing sharpness of a character. I cheer for your next chapter.
UchihaGirl58
2009-07-23 . chapter 6
i like it, it's nice to see an outsiders observation of their relationship and the style is different but good not your typical story.
Moxxi
2009-07-12 . chapter 6
I really like it <3
having the point of view come from Kanae is really interesting idea.
Keep up the good work!
Shiro-Kitsune8
2009-06-14 . chapter 6
I can see why she's worried if Neuro is Yako's 'assistant' giving his personallity and all.

Can't wait for the next chapter!!
MikariStar
2009-05-15 . chapter 6
very interesting so far, update soon!
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