I had a blast from the word go ...

Read straight on through...what a fun night!

Each chapter was like Xmas... wrapped inside a pretty box with a big red bow on top.

Thank you so much for the gift!
Karen

You deserve it! Congrats!

Congratulations on your win Denise, it was so well deserved. I loved this story.

Congratulations Denise. I'm so happy for you! You totally deserve it my friend!

awe that was such a cute story! i loved it! the last part made me cry but thats because of the "chick flick moment" as Dean would put it lol great story

VERY GOOD! I really loved that! i liked how at the end Dean still felt guilt for what happened to Sammy and it wasn't all rainbows and lolly pops! I don't think he should still be feeling guilt but I can see what he was thinking. You KNOW Sammy would never blame DEan for anything but Dean would always blame himself for anything that happens to his baby brother. EXCELLENT STORY!

YAY "Uncle" Bobby! I LOVE LOVE LOVE HIM! Poor Dean! ): Poor Sammy!): Who DOESN'T love them I swear? I just worship my boys! This is VERY good! I love it! I'm actually excited to see what happens next! I don't worry though cause Uncle Bobby's there! I have the worlds biggest crush on him!LOL!

love it! Very descriptive and good addition to atmosphere, which is most definitely a plus. Keep up the good work =)

I've been looking forward to reading this and last night I watched LOST and then curled up in bed and finally pulled it out. It is really good.

Some of the highlights that I enjoyed:
I so enjoyed the blip about the 13 year old survivor who's father had given his life for him. I wanted to read more about him. He intrigued me and the boys' reaction to him was wonderful.

'Dean insisting that the go directly past go...' GREAT line. LOVED it.

'Dean stood stock...' I have never heard that. I'm not even 100% that I know what it means, but I like it. It oddly fits.

The description of the Yowie - Ew. Very descriptive and right on the mark. Nice job.

I just adore it when anyone brings Bobby into the story and I always hold my breath. I think he'd be tough to write (I've never done it) and I enjoy it when people get him right. As you did. Oh, and I like this Tom guy. He's kind of a cool character that you invented. Nice, strong hunter.

I laughed at the "I want to see Sam NOW" and then the "You want your damn shoes?" Nicely woven together.

'Was that Metallica?' But of course...

I thought you did a great job with the short chapters. Sometimes I find them to be choppy for me to read, but you did a great job ending them with a cliffie or with a sentimental moment or great concern. You tied in everything really well.

I have a complaint, though. The end. What was that? I was so into their conversation and then - BAM! The end. WTF? I wanted more, dh. I really, really did. I thought it was wonderful and moving and beautiful and just too short. Ah, but it's always good to want more and not overdo. I know, I know, but I did. I wanted seconds.

Great story. Thanks for writing this.

Excellent wrap!

Great way to finish on a touching brotherly moment.

*sigh*

Thank you.

Wonderful ending! Loved Dean and Sam's talk at the end. Wish that had happened in an episode. :)

Lisa

Great story. Lots of brother and family angst and emotion.

Aw that was a wonderful chapter and a lovely way to end the story, I'll be sad to see it go!

I loved Dean's revelation over his guilt and it warmed my heart to see both brothers back together again. I adore fics set in this time period, with the guilt and separation issues, I even set my own fic in this time period! Great stuff I loved it, I'm always a sucker for hurt Sam and worried Dean, well done!

I've noticed that you have a couple of new stories, yey! Being from the UK I am trying to avoid fics set in season 4 as we don't have it yet (but soon I hope because I‘m tearing my hair out), so I think I will have to set that fic to one side for now but I'll definitely read the other one.

Take care and happy writing, Madebyme.x

LOVED IT!

PaulaXan

great job. that was a good story