 bluerow 2008-10-28 . chapter 1OMG! Although I am a Dasey fan, and I do love Dasey, I actually DIDN'T hate the ending. I've been waiting for someone to write a depressing Dasey where they DON'T end up together. Kudos for being different, and having the courage to post this with much of the fan base against you!
My only critique would be the tense, past tense tends to sound more natural, where as present starts to sound a little weird, but that's just a personal opinion. |
 Cookie Queen of the Nebula 2008-10-28 . chapter 1Both Derek and Casey come to the realization: They will never be together.
But screw destiny.
That's how I would have ended it, all in all, it was a good fic, well written compared to my piece of crap. Good Job! |