wow man chapter nine alone can stand as it's own story

Bloody brilliant! Took me a whole week to read chapter 9! I love it! Keep up the excellent writing!

Bah...so I didn't read this a while back...T_T

I'm really impressed. I was just looking for some good Zelda fanfics (I usually try looking by which stories have over 200 reviews...), and a lot I tended not to like. So I stuck it on search for 100k words...and stumbled across this.

I'd like to say, chapter 9 was overwhelming. So long...but I loved it. The twists, the turns, etc. Overall, the story drew me in, and I couldn't stop until I finished.
This is one of the few fanfics I reviewed, and I'm really surprised at how this fanfic has only 15 reviews...it's one of the best I've read.

You are a very good writer this story is defiantely going on my favorites list. It was long but I always finish reading them. Ket and Impa seem to get along well and I always loved the game Legend of Zelda and the second one. but I have to say The first one was better.

Okay, this is flipping good.

Completely unpredictable plot twists, good characters, brilliant description

The chapters could have done with being more organised, especially chapter 9

A few minor spelling mistakes

Overall, a brilliant story

O.o First fic? Wow! Damn! I wish I could write this well now! This is so nice to see in the midst of the flame fest that the Zelda section has become..*puts away the grill.. and goes off to start reading the rest*

Kris, that was wonderful. I loved every minute of it! There were a few parts where the plot moved a little quickly, maybe a few parts needed a bit more exposition, but overall, it really left me with a great feeling. And the ending really worked I wasn't expecting what happened to happen, but you tied it up wonderfully in the last section! Kudos, gal!

Wow. I mean really wow, I wish I could write like that, one question, how come chap. 7 is chap. 8? Was 8 just a typo or are you cheating me out of a chapter? I thought it was pretty strange when Ket was dreaming and then the next chapter she's coming out of the lost woods with Rill, even if it made sense at the end. Did you leave that bit out on purpose or was it a mistake? Anyway, just wanted to say your fic is crazygood and if you don't write more I'll hunt you down and wring your scrawny neck... if I don't die from withdrawal first.

ANOTHER great fic! Enjoyed it all the way to the bottom, then pouted when there wasn't more. Did you know you've got the chapter (chapter7) misnamed as Chapter 8? Just wanted to point that out. Hope you're writing the true chapter 8 now... I look forward to reading it.

Ok, Yucca, I got myself out here, where's the rest of it? I just gave ogg the site cuz he needed something goos to read and he's gonna be mad when he hits the end of whats posted... Anyone else- this is a totally awesome story, all the way through- I love it lots!

Yucca, this is fabulous, really excellent. I love the Kokiri baby being born. Keep up the gorgeous work, and talk to you later!

Wow. What oyou have written is realy good. So, does Ket have the Triforce of Courage? I'm betting she does. I have enjoyed this. It's really involing. Oh, and thanks for reveiwing my story.

Well, I finally got here to give you a review. P I agree with what Tori says about the prologue. It ties in very nicely with how you handeled the ending. Love the story! Keep up the great work!

I'm impressed. It's not easy to write in new characters to an established universe. And though this Ket has not exactly my favorite as of yet, future chapters may change that opinion (hint, hint). I still like Impa and I'd like to see more of this Elias. He can be a spoiled brat, but he also can be quite serious. I've decided, I like this fic. Please continue.

SWEET! Your style is really great and it's so NICE to see real writing in the midst
of all the nonsense and crap that's out there. I like the fact that you've got descendants

in this story when writing a fanfic, I think it's always risky (to the "popularity factor
at least) to not write about the well known charas. People are ready to read anything

about Link and Zelda, but it takes a really good story to carry unknown charas
through Hyrule, and you do it really well. Nice work! _