|Reviews for A Delicate Chaos|
| Ninja99 6/25/11 . chapter 1
PLEASE CONTINUE THIS! 3
| Liberty Blake 12/30/10 . chapter 1
A good start for a fic, can't wait to read more. Please update!
| dont know f u lyk my idea but 4/2/10 . chapter 1
I really like the way you write the story. the endng is really a cliffhanger for me since there was like... trouble identifying wether the new character( which i think will aidou's love interest) is a vampire, a human o could be a half vampire half human. I'm a very great fan of aidou and i keep on daydreaming about him and an oc character as his lover interest. this oc character is just like him too. sometmes immature most of the time arrogant and is also a flirt but still caring. she is a halfblood, one of the rarest kinds of vampire "breeds". for me the halfbloods are in between the purebloods and the nobles or like...one of her parents is a pureblood and the other a noble. anyways, i was just telling you if this because i want to share my idea.
I dont know if you like my idea but pls consider it, if in case you dont have a plot yet... :D
| Black-Emperess 1/10/10 . chapter 1
more detail preferably-but good none the less.
am i to assume you are no longer dealing with your Erutis/Krayon fanfic, Rating My Professor? I'd like to know so i can either keep an eye out for updates or remove it completely from my alert list. wb please.
| TheSneakyHobo 11/20/09 . chapter 1
this sounds really good ! ! ! please update it! ! !
| NKUUchiha 6/8/09 . chapter 1
That was cool! Very original! Most fanfic authors would put new students and yada yadda(like me o_0)... I like how you dramatically express the point! Continue it please! :3
| secretofserenity 3/28/09 . chapter 1
very good, please continue!
| Ravenclaw Slytherin 2/20/09 . chapter 1
Nice Begining! Update soon!
| Stereotypical Rae 1/28/09 . chapter 1
I loved it I think all vampire knight fans should read it! And the writer has excellent talent!
| Nanasaki 12/22/08 . chapter 1
I like this, please update soon! wanna read more :D
| Delightfuliza 12/21/08 . chapter 1
I like this. It's interesting and this girl/woman does seem unique Hope Aidou come in soon 3
Update soon please! I would love to see more of this.
| S. Buttons 11/9/08 . chapter 1
well, im curious. this new staff member sounds interesting so update soon. :D
| Fabulous Georgina 10/30/08 . chapter 1
I think this story is really really good!
There aren't really any parts I can complain about actually! I think the fact that the OC being a teacher is definitely super original and her void personality is definitely something that can develop into strang situations with Aido's own, cocky ego. I definitely think you should continue with the story. It is obviously early to tell whether you write the character well and delve deeply into her character but, judging by the good grammar and well developedness of your stroy, I have the feeling that you will. I am excited to see what you will pull out for this story next!
| Matthew Harper 10/29/08 . chapter 1
I love it! Update soon!
| athanasiamikee 10/29/08 . chapter 1
Plese update soon!
I'll be waiting!
It sound really nice