A very interesting and crazy update to your update. Keep an eye out on spelling and grammar as well as sentence flow, since I've been seeing alot of run on and mis-spaced sentences. Other than a few errors, I've enjoyed the newest update, poor Kiva, I hope the boys will rescue her. Please continue soon.

This was a good beginning to yours and Darkstarj13's crossover fanfic. Dispite several grammar and spelling errors, I enjoyed the newest story and I can't wait to see what will happen next. So as always, please continue soon.

finally we can reveal out true power to the world... (insert evil laugh here)

this fic can only get more interesting as time goes on :)