That was so pretty!I started crying at the end

How beautiful!

And yet so tragic. Little Cyndia and Pegasus in the garden reminds me a little of The Secret Garden; I just love how you wrote their story. Nice, too, to explain why its called Roseshipping, but also little things like how Pegasus paints and is pictured with roses a lot. You depict him with a sort of vulnerability, something I love to read. This was a joy to read, your style is just so effortless and natural. Ironically enough, I'm growing some plants in my room right now, and they're just starting to shoot through the soil. :)

Cyndia was perfect in this: innocent, carefree, curious, and not to mention, very much in love. You've also shown the reader a rare glimpse of Pegasus' heart as well. This isn't one of my favorite pairings, but the writing itself was wonderful!

I really likked the insight to this, the explanation to the roses that were associated with Roseshipping in the anime makes sense now.

Please keep writing.

Wow, this was really good! I really liked it! Great job _

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So much win.

Unnatural amounts of win, in fact.

Win beyond win.