Wow. that was pretty intense. It was heartbreaking but beautifully written at the same time. I really hope you post the related stories soon! I really want to read them

I wouldn't have filed it as horror, but apart from that, it's honest and sad and probably doing everything you want it to.

I'm definitly looking forward to more.

I feel that you portrayed this issue rather well. Excellently done. It certainly does provide insight to Fireflight's character.

OH GOD FIREFLIGHT.

HAVE YOU EVER SEEN RED DRAGON? THE PART WHERE THEY FEED THE GUY HIS OWN BRAIN? I'M GOING TO DO THAT TO WHISPER. BUT I WON'T DRUG HIM FIRST.

YOU ALWAYS BRING OUT THE CAPSLOCKING FANGIRL IN ME. EVEN WHEN IT'S SOMETHING SO HORRIBLE I WANT TO THROW UP AND THEN COMMIT MURDER. I KINDA WANT TO ADD THIS STORY TO MY FAVORITES BECAUSE IT'S SO GOOD, SO MOVING(?) BUT.

Oh 'flight. Poor little gamma.

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I really want to say something else but the first words that spring to my head are 'I hope someone kills Whisper', and I'm dead serious. Probably a bit too violent a reaction for a bit of fiction but...

You did a very good job portraying this, at least. And you're right, for your Fireflight I suppose it would be a vital part of his character. It certainly explains a few things now, I suppose.

It was creepy, and gave me chills. How someone could actually think what they were doing was *right*, and *Fireflight*...Oh, God, Fireflight. That ending, where he was vacant and with the secrets. That was a perfect ending, left the perfect emotions...and I feel kind of bad for thinking so, because of what it was about.

Very, very, *very* good job. I admire your courage in posting this, writing this, and I thank you for doing so. It was *very* well written. And I'm glad there will be snuggles. Fireflight desperately needs them. (And meanwhile I'll go over in this direction with a machete and get started on Whisper, yes?)