I hope this is not the end... A well crafted story, much like the series; though much more 'darker' than before. Well done and I wish you the best in creating and completing this story.

Ka Kite ano
(till we meet again)

Kawa

really good chapter, aww poor Hideki having, plz plz update soon!!

well, if Hideki gives in, theyll have both Freya and Chi! Jima should attach a tracker to Hideki, then he could rescue him!! lol :]

creeps! nice change of POV though, to see what the bad guys are up to...

aww some Yuzuki/Minoru fluff to lighten the mood. I'm glad the story dragged out farther than you expected! as with the best writers, the characters direct you, not the other way around. :] <3

yay for long overdue reviews~ great chapter! introduction of a sleazy lawyer! :]

Good chapters, oo what ever is going to happen next sounds really good, plz update soon

great chapters, aww poor Hideki, plz plz update soon!!

*Biggest squeal in history*
Please continue! I didn't want it to end! You are a good writer and i hope that chi will be okay! Please keep writing!

oh no Chi!Oh i beg please let Chi be okay.but uh...nice story.u don't have to read this
(yay Sillver and Neena!)

plaese update soon i'm really enjoying this story

This seems a tad unrealistic. Chi's been splattered, it's extremely unlikely she'll be repaired. Why would the syndicate go through this much trouble? Really, whoever's in charge of that place should be fired.

hmm Lol, don't have much to say that I haven't already told you ;] Chapter looks great! you've come far from that first draft. I look forward to reading chapter six!

very nice chapter in revealing the plot! am finishing up with Ch5 and will email it back to you soon :)

i like this! keep it up. I'm glad you brought Jima and Dita back too. i really liked those two. ^^