Brilliant.

Beautiful.

:)

That was absolutely beautiful. For a while, I wasn't sure how it would end, or if I would enjoy it, but I truly did. A lot of times, you read a story and when it ends you feel like something is missing, you're left wanting more... but I think you've succeeded in closing up all the loose ends. It was very good. :)

*Sniff* man that was soo good but soo sad. I loved the story! The end was great, hehe I don't know if Naoko had this in mind when she created Cosmos, but it makes sense. Great imagination! Thank you for the fic.

T-T

that was a tear-jerker of a story.

i am crying, if only you could see it. this tale is beautiful and touching, and i cannot wait to read more.

Wow I didn't expect Pluto to go before Venus. It's interesting how you've developed the story so far, hope you update soon.

This story is so interesting! I hope you finish soon. I'm curious to see how it ends :)

And, as always, fantastic job!

This is such a sad fiction :'( I hope there won't come a chapter when even King Endymion passes away, or you'll definitely have me in tears. I like your idea of telling the story of how Cosmos came to be and I like the way you write. Looking forward to the next update

I demand more. :) But I fear my dear Venus shall pass next! Ah! It shall make me sad.

I'm interested to see how this whole thing will end. Keep up the good work. :)

I wonder what Mars was thinking about?

This is beautiful...I never really thought of the passing of the senshi and the Queen because I never really liked Chibi-usa...So are Endymion and Serenity going to go together? Or shall Serenity ascend to the True Throne as Sailor Cosmos?


I can't wait for another chapter! Amazing work, dear!

Beautiful. It reminds me of something I read a while back..

This is sad but well written. Have you thought about using this idea to write a big story instead of just telling what happened?

These are sad, but beautiful.

It's mean to make us wait a week for the next chapter, haha.