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Lee723
2009-11-30 . chapter 5
Oh Esme suspects Something!
and obviously liz is guilty of something, she HAS to know Esme, after all she stole her baby!!

I SO love the relationship between alice and my boy Edward :D:D
She tackled him, the little thing certainly does have too much energy doesn't she? lol

I've still got a lot more to read, and it might be a bit early to be hating on Liz but I can't help it.
I'm sure there will be a "logical" reason for how she ended up with Edward, but I don't know if i can be sorry for her when i find out what that reason is.

loved the chap K :)
Lee723
2009-11-30 . chapter 4
Ooh I like this chap A lot!
E found out that Em and Bella aren't together and
he found out about Em's legacy :)

Which I might say is an awesome story, and the room, that really piqued my interest but since you told me what happened, I get it.
I still gotta read more and see how this plays out.
But I gotta say I'm sad for poor Esme :(

loved it bb.
Lee723
2009-11-30 . chapter 3
I now believe that your sole intention is to make me cry, isn't it?
GAH* I didn't though ad it was hard as shit not to esp at the ending when Midg got E the shirt *sigh*

I'm just a tad emo now is all :(

I still loved it though, even though it had more sadness to me in it.

Great job bb :)
Lee723
2009-11-30 . chapter 2
I'm still loving it bb :)
It's a little sad i won't lie but i can't get over it, cause the snark and Edward's dirty mind keeps me entertained lol.

Dude got a boob glance and a panty flash LMAO!
Methinks Bella likes him lol.

great job bb :)
Lee723
2009-11-30 . chapter 1
I LOVE your Edward Kim!
He's sarcastic and a realist and even though his life sucks ass and he doesn't like it, he ACCEPTS it.

I'm surprised that Bella approached E first :O
But I like it. LOL @ Him getting a good view of her cleavage :D:D

And the Cheers ref. Now I have the freaking theme song in my head lol.

Onto more :)

Lee
miztrezboo
2009-11-28 . chapter 35
The skirt on Bella’s outfit was a tad bit longer than Alice’s and I knew why, but when I saw Bella in her costume for the first time I’m sure I grinned like the horny teenage boy that I was. Actually, I know I did because Charlie actually spotted me staring and smacked me in the back of the head. “Stop drooling at my daughter in front of me,” he warned. “It’s a whole entire level of weird that I can’t handle right now.”
- bwahahah i love Charlie!

Opening the box, I laughed out loud at the sight of the biggest set of dishes I had ever seen. - HAD to get him dishes! Gotta love Em and his big bro gifts!!

awe best christmas ever! Loved all the gifts and emotions that went flying about bb!
sessahhh
2009-11-27 . chapter 35
Great chapter. I really like how you throw in some sarcasm and jokes when Edward is feeling uncomfortable. I guess we all have our coping mechanisms. I like how we are completely overlooking the fact that one of them, Jasper I think, is highly allergic to cats. Unless I missed the subtle this-cat-is-hypoallergenic. LOL. I proly did... plus I think it was mentioned the kitty will stay in Edward's room although I've never seen a cat confined to one or two rooms of a house. Moving on, I thought the gift exchange was lovely and really sweet. It's nice to see happy times for the crew after such angst. Glad to see the update. Wonder what their plans for New Year's are... smexin' times are upon us I hope.
mspacman1
2009-11-27 . chapter 35
Great chapter!! :)
BQOTFU
2009-11-27 . chapter 35
The presents were perfect! I love that he gave Esme pictures of him. *tear* Very sweet.

And, what is up with the shovel? Is Charlie going to bury him somewhere? LOL. Thats the first thing I thought of.

*Good job, bb* :)
linnfromia
2009-11-27 . chapter 35
I enjoyed the kitten fluff in this chapter, and getting to see what Edward actually got for people. And Charlie, as always, your Charlie is excellent. You write of a fun, angst-free Christmas here.

Sorry my ongoing reviews have been screwed up by my inability to format quotes correctly. I'll give up on that, and just reiterate that I am enjoying Legacy very much, all 35 chapters. Congrats on getting here, and thanks for the long chapter!
linnfromia
2009-11-26 . chapter 32
Carlisle's POV -- very welcome, very interesting. Although some of it rehashes story already read, it adds a lot of depth. And I just love your Carlisle.
love jones
2009-11-26 . chapter 14
Aww. Incredible cuteness. Brotherly comfort.
And I can't believe the title didn't tell me more!
love jones
2009-11-26 . chapter 13
I fucking knew it! Did I call it or did I call it!?!?!?! Well, I didn't actually explain my suspicions, so I guess you'll just have to take my word for it. I was even right about that paper towel. Damn.

In other news, I'm crying a little.
linnfromia
2009-11-26 . chapter 25
I've been wondering when those letters were going to make an appearance. Great chapter, lots of heartfelt moments, but my favorite line:
<> Absolutely laughed out loud!
linnfromia
2009-11-26 . chapter 22
Baby steps, and caring enough about Esme to talk to Carlisle about her meltdown. "Merge Ahead" is a great title for this chapter.
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