i loved this especially the epilogue ! very well done)

Great job on the story I liked it alot.

Very cute story!

What an awesome ending to an awesome story. And Don still has his fear of dogs, though I can't blame him for that. Great job on this story. You are truly an awesome writer.
The Bubbly One,

Shell

Awww. What a sweet chapter. I loved it so much with Splinter talking to Donnie. That was awesome. Nice job.
The Bubbly One,

Shell

Oooh, busted! I just knew this was going to happen. Nicely done, Machi. I hope Don will learn his lesson.
The Bubbly One,

Shell

Yes, Machi, you are evil, but I still like you. I just hope the boys are okay. Nicely done.
The Bubbly One,

Shell

Yikes, this isn't good. But I have to give props to Donnie for wanting to protect his brother from the dog. Nicely done.
The Bubbly One,

Shell

Yay! Leo's finally awake. That's a good sign. But it's not a good sign that the dog has come back. I hope Splinter will be able to save his sons from the mean dog. Nicely done once again. You rock on this.
The Bubbly One,

Shell

Man, you're really good with cliffies. I really enjoyed this chapter. Yeah, Don knows better than to lie, and I'm sure it'll bite him in the tail later on. That's usually what happens when one lies. Nicely done.
The Bubbly One,

Shell

Ooooh, that doesn't sound good when those words are uttered. I loved the bonding moment between Splinter and Donnie. You write them so well. It's cute that Don wants to stay with his brother because he feels responsible. It makes me wonder if this is a story Don will tell Leo in the future. Nicely done once again. I just love your work.
The Bubbly One,

Shell

Awww. Poor Donnie and his feelings of guilt. And poor Leo for getting hurt. Let's hope things get better for both of them. Nicely done.
The Bubbly One,

Shell

Uh-oh! This isn't good. Nice start, Machi. I hope Splinter will rescue his sons in time.
The Bubbly One,

Shell

Puppies! I love puppies! And i lov the turtles more al grown up. Oh, well. They're cute young. Now update no place to call home!

Oh! She had puppies! So adorable! now update no place to call home!