I apologize for the late review, but I thought it was fantastic. (:

I bet it'd be really heart-wrenching to be in a situation like that, and I think you played it out very well.

This wasn't messy, and I liked it! :)

This was really good. You did well sorting out your thoughts, and it was also clever the way you related it back - like with the Doctor's regeneration and the parallel Pete. And I'm glad that Rose ended up settling for the new Doctor :)

it's very good! Much better than mine. :)

fantastic! wasn't messy at all, i really liked it!

Aw, that was amazing! Rose deserves happiness with the Doctor, and in a sense, she now has it.
I didn't think it was scrambled, I thought it was put together very well. Well done!