Its cute. I like how it is kind of choppy, in a rhythmic sense.

I really think it would have been better if you had expanded on some of the things you said. I guess you did say it was a shorter version of a larger fanfiction though.

fangirling squees make puppies pee.

nice and short. i like it quite a bit.

If I was Sakura I would burn those books. Good job.

you write beautifully. :D

Ok i luv this story a lot but it doesn't show the struggles as much i am and have been caught up in the Kaka/Saku drama for 6 years now and i have written like 30 million short and long stories about Kaka/Saku and they are my fave couple EVER! I would love to talk to you more if you mail me back about this or ever get on fanfiction again my email adress is mail me if you get the chance and keep Kaka/Saku with you :D and keep writing sounds good make another or an extremely like 90 chapter thing for them explaining Kakashi's troubles and Sakura's also and how they solve them and get together and stuff. I'm terrible at writing stories myself but, ive been told i give pretty good ideas and i can write a good story if someone gives me a plot sequence and a sentence to start out with and some time. Mail me with a response and hope you mail me at all. Bye and on a scale of one to ten i give your story a 22

i love kakasaku drama too. its so nice how in the end kakashi decides to let go of his conflicted emotions and just accept sakura

so pretty, really :3

Ah, good fic! Wonderful, awesome, fantastic. Loved the formatting and use of descriptive words. Very deep and moving. Nice job!

I really liked this story. One typo I observed was dessert when I'm pretty sure you meant desert.

Aw kind of bitterly sweet but so cute at the end :)

Very well written!