Wow this is one amazing story. :) And refreshing to see a Mamoru x Rei one shot fic.

Very interesting piece. Nice work.

First I want to say that I am back home from my vacation! I missed talking to you sweets!
Also, I love this fic. I'm quite adventurous when it comes to alternate pairings and this one was grand. I love Mamoru with Setsuna, Rei, or Ami (after Reading Vespers it opened my eyes), and maybe even Makoto (it was my childhood pairing).
The tug of war with the feelings was real, and Setsuna's confession was very in character; she doesn't look like the type to be gushy anyway. The pacing was good, descriptions were spot on, I just didn't appreciate the name changes...
Over all great piece. My best friend is spazzing cause she's a S/D fan...
Miss ya!

You have Mamoru refer to Serenity as Serena, then Usagi. I personally don't care which names are used, but stick to either Japanese or English.

Ok I'm not usually one for rei mamoru stories but I'm in love with this one and i can see why your in love with it. It's well written has depth and emotions and reminds people that a reincarnated life does not mean the same fate as the previous life! He has fate in his hands. I've never read many stories in which he has much control. This makes me feel sorry for pluto tho. But you know i think at some point they(the senshi) all loved mamoru and should have just haremed around him(lol). Anyway I love this story and am glad your proud of it.

This one shot gave me the shivers of delight. I always used to imagine that Mamoru, if he had a choice, would have chosen Rei, based on the anime version anyway. If you wrote a sequel or another chapter about Mamoru running up those steps to confess to Rei his feelings and how the others take it, I will ber overcome with joy :)

blech, i need chocolate after that. i am a S/D fan all the way. From an unbiased POV its good writing - but as a fan of S/D - I have to officially boo you.

Boo :P hehe :)