..Wow. *blink* ..Wow.
Love it! D
Hilarious how Thirteen diagnosed the patient right away, when the guys couldn't thehe.

I loved it, short and sweet. Keep it up.)

Nice Hope that there will be more to this *nods* if so, can't wait for the next update

That was good and is wasn't over the top or took away from the story. I hate when writing is trashy but yours wasn't. I hope to read more soon. They're sweet together in the sense that they compliment one another and Cameron is patient where Remy is protective and fairly brooding and likes to be in control.

Phenomenal. I really hope you update this soon, it's a great story!"and go home and have sex with your girlfriend. That last one only applies to Thirteen, because she’s the only one here with a girlfriend.-Possibly the best line of the story so far... great way to end a chapter. It had me cracking up so much!:

I think I may need to eventually reread this story because I have no idea whats going on but I think its in tune with the characters and I like it either way.

Awesome. Captivating story and the characters are pretty much how they are on the show. Just awesome. Keep writing please

needs longer chapters can't wait for the next one

wow! more of the same please!

that was intense again and they talk to each other very candidly which is interesting. At some point 13 may actually talk but their interactions are interesting.

wow.. can't think much after reading that.. just wow... O_o

nice lyrics there btw.. just suits this update..8)

interesting story written in a very brief style that suits it. You could do with spacing your sentences better)

can't wait for more!)

I like how this is intense and realistic in the sense that Remy is really depressed and more or less going through the motions but she wants to feel alive. This is coming along well and I hope you write more soon.

ooh.. come back here soon.. glad that you updated this..8)