I love this(:

This is so emotional. I absolutely love it! You should write more for weeds please?

well, you misspelled the word "fence" and fanfiction should be about something, and yours was just a summary of what happend.

nice try though.

maybe give it another shot

fanfiction is an alternate story with the same characters and settings etc...

Nice. Nancy's husband's name was "Judah" though.

I really like this though. I think you've got Nancy's character down very well.

Good, except the father's name is Judah, not Jonah

this was good. but why so short. this has much potential so i hope u add more.

Yay, a Weeds fic! I'm so happy to see this. This was an interesting read, I like your writing style. I think some proofreading could be helpful (some punctuation issues mostly in the first paragraph, I think stabling should be stabilizing but if that's not what you mean just ignore me) but the story itself is very well done.

Ohh man! I'm so glad that you wrote this! And I hope more people write in this fandom. It is a fantastic show! Thanks for starting the way. :)

aww :( it would be interesting if it was Nancy who died