YAY! You continued!

Okay, I really hurt for Ellie on so many levels during this chapter and I think you described it best with the comparisons of her failed relationships. Brilliantly done! Can't wait to see another update.

Also, I would LOVE if you read a few of my oneshots in my Crellie collection, "Motion Picture Soundtrack". They're a few sweet ones, but many of them are VERY angsty, so yeah, love to hear your critique. Thanks again for updating. :D

MrsBigTuna

You should finish this story. Plain and simple. It's amazing what you did with this tragic episode and how cruel Craig could be in this stage of the series. I know who you don't think Crellie can be sweet, and I admire how you can make some of these chapters sound so savage. Great writing and so descriptive. I think my favorite was in the last chapter about leaning on the mirror, like twins supporting. Just love that imagery.

I hope you continue it, it needs to be finished.

MrsBigTuna

I really like the story so far and i love how you write, well type. It's telling the story but has some of your personality in it too!

Amazing.
I can't wait until the next chapter.

Ok, I love this and am seriously interested in reading more. Never really though about this scenario, but I'm glad you did and I love your writing style.

poor ellie
good chapter
very interesting
update soon!

Absolutely breathtaking.

Really good!

Great story! I want to keep reading! Update soon?

This is quite interesting and strangely starting to seem believable. Keep it up ;)

This chapter seemed more believable
interesting plot
update soon!

Oh yay! New updates.

I. Love. This.

Please continue, and this is too much of a tease lol. You're really great at that, you know it?

Especially with the imagery: “Good,” he said, leaning over, and I could feel the rough stubble on his cheeks against my thigh. It kind of tingled and spread from there to everywhere.

Because you know where this is leading! Awesome, as always.

Cool. I always thought about how Ellie could do coke with Craig, but it seemed OOC for her. But if you think about it, (I believe) she was always willing to change herself for him, so this could happen.
It was a great read, anyway! :)

realy interesting!! I never thought ellie would actually do coke with craig.

Wow. Bad Ellie! But I'm very interested. I'd love to see how things transpire... Please update!