 metaphor 2009-07-03 . chapter 10I adore this story. Beautifully written, with spot-on characterization. I liked the flow of it, too; I found it very engaging.
I hope you write more in this fandom. |
 Anonyma 2009-02-12 . chapter 7 Hmm... nice one. I especially like the angry Superman part, after all, he can't be that mild mannered all the time. About 'Kovács': it means Blacksmith in hungarian (just for the sake of accuracy). If you were looking for the meaning of 'Smith' - its 'Szabó'. And John = 'János'. Jan is the transcript in slavic languages. Sorry, got carried away. Keep up the good work! |
 Uli-007 2009-02-07 . chapter 10I liked this story very much. Even though I had read "strays" before and knew the ending, it was full of suspense to the last. |
 remey74 2008-12-05 . chapter 10loved it can you do an sequel? |
 Peacockgirl 2008-11-28 . chapter 10Aww. Cuteness. A little shorter than I'd hoped (I'm adicted to fluff) but every word is perfectly choosen. |
 ReadingRed 2008-11-28 . chapter 10great story. I'm glad it has a happy ending. |
 Raven3182 2008-11-27 . chapter 10This is certianly a great series that you have going. I can't wait to read more. Thank you! |
 mitzi67 2008-11-26 . chapter 8 I really liked this story. Maybe do a mirror version from two point's of view. Jason's then the
one from Batman. A short story on the conversation between bats/supes would be nice. |
 Amethyst246 2008-11-24 . chapter 10Woo hoo! Looking forward to more; maybe more Batman as opposed to Superman? There just aren't enough good Batman fics in the world. |
 Vanafindiel 2008-11-24 . chapter 10SEQUEL!!SEQUEL!!SEQUEL!!SEQUEL!!SEQUEL!!SEQUEL!!SEQUEL!!SEQUEL!!
Haha. You'll never guess who Batman is. Lol. Does he tell her? |
 katydidtoo 2008-11-21 . chapter 9Yay! |
 KlynneL 2008-11-21 . chapter 9What a roller coaster ride! This chapter is great. First they are ready to give up, and then the real hero's show up! Too bad Alfred couldn't say more, but I guess that is another story.
Great job! |
 Vanafindiel 2008-11-21 . chapter 9I'm so glad for Lois. Good job!! |
 Peacockgirl 2008-11-21 . chapter 9Ah. Loved this chapter! All the details are so great--Perry's apology, Jimmy asking about Superman, Alfred's grandfather voice. And the last sentence--yay! I'm guessing that we'll get a little bit of family fluff soon. |
 KlynneL 2008-11-14 . chapter 7Wow. Wow. I would never want to cross an angry Superman! And they say to watch out for mama bear.
I love Sawyer's response to her co-worker "He's attempting suicide." "What would you call pissing off Superman?" You had me laughing on that one. So, now that you have a completely infuriated Supes, what's next? |