I wish You had wrote more. or another charter. Love to see what you'd do next.
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I liked this. Betty really got a raw deal at times, and this fic captures that perfectly. :)

This was lovely! You captured Betty's voice so well.

Favorite line: "I want to be everything for him, like he is for me. But I’m not for him."

I love betty. They can do so many things with that character. The way you characterized her thoughts were spot on.

I liked the title! Keep up the good work!