|Reviews for No daddy|
| Two Ghosts in One Mirror 10/6/10 . chapter 1
Poor Lucius's wife. It must be terrible to witness one's husband having passionate sex with a 'whole'. And what on earth does 'that girl needs a good wiping from her old man' mean? Sounds kinky. Oh, and how exactly does one turn a 'coroner'?
It goes without saying that the plot is laughably bad, all the characters are so far OOC they're practically from another planet entirely, and your grammar, spelling, general punctuation, capitalization, etcetera, etcetera are all absolutely dreadful. The reviewer could go on and on about your unfortunate ignorance as to the various forms of 'your' and 'there', your appallingly limited vocabulary, and your abysmal lack of subject-verb agreement.
Dear, in the future, do make a habit of typing with your eyes open, and remain conscious and alert during English class. Your 'writing abilities' (or lack thereof) indicate that you've sat through the entirety of your education with your fingers planted firmly in your ears. Perhaps, had this not been the case, you would have written a decent story.
| voldyismyfather 11/22/09 . chapter 2
love itx x
| Refrigerator-Burn 8/26/09 . chapter 2
STUPID LUCIUS! I HOPE YOUR LIFE IS RUINED! YOUR SUCH A TERRIBLE PERSON! HOW COULD YOU CHEAT ON HER? YOU JERK!
great story though! thats a bunch of unexpected twists on the story. im curious on where your going with this. update soon please! PLEASE.
| xxiceheartxx343 8/26/09 . chapter 2
update soon its really good
| christy86 4/15/09 . chapter 1
update soon can't wait for more chapters good work
| yumi2482 12/20/08 . chapter 1
| pesuasion 12/15/08 . chapter 1
umm i like your story u still doing it?
| kiarcheo 11/10/08 . chapter 1
really interesting!please update soon
| Refrigerator-Burn 10/31/08 . chapter 1
wow! whats up with hermione? this is really good by the way. i like it. you should keep going. im...so...SLEPY! i have had had no sleep since forever! kk bye! have fun on halloween!
| Erm what 10/30/08 . chapter 1
Way to break the english language.
| minerdude 10/29/08 . chapter 1
I think it should be Harry, and her street smarts should help him