wow...I can't believe how good this story is...I really want to read more of it. Could you update please?

I am blown away with how good this story is. Raven is, generally, my least favorite ToV character. (I think they portrayed/voiced him too campy and the serious parts of his character get ignored for too long. I start liking him more around the point that he kidnaps Estelle and his identity as Schwann is revealed, but that's 30+ hours into the game normally!) But this story let me see Raven through the eyes of someone who loves him, someone who sees his quirks as endearing. It's refreshing and sweet.

I love the traditions and laws you created for the guilds. They really seemed to ring true and mesh with what parts of the world were explored in the game. Your descriptions are great, and I agree with the person who said you have a concise style. Simply fantastic all around.

Oh, no! I'm gonna cry! Poor Schwann! I feel what he feels now. I just wish I could understand! *bawls* I can't wait to read what happens next! Do your thing, K! It's amazing so far!

Purple Pirate Lex ^_^

This story is so damn tragic. ;-;

I mean, I probably shouldn't even be reading this, as I haven't finished the game yet, but I couldn't tear my eyes away. ^^

Very nicely done! Your story has captivated my interest. Normally I wouldn't read anything in the romance genre but my curiosity to learn more of Schwann's backstory has led me to this wonderful story of yours.

I hope you keep it up!

Dammit my last review cut off. Sorry about that.

I really like your writing -- it's descriptive but not overly so, and it has a neat, personal style that I really like. :)

The prologue and first chapter are very interesting so far, and I'm loving this pairing and the way you characterize both Schwann and Casey. I can't wait to read the rest! :D

midnafeathers from LJ, reviewing as promised.

I absolutely adore this story! It's very well written and each chapter makes me yearn for more! Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work!

This story is excellent. Another great chapter done. I'm assuming this breakup is because of Yeager? Anyway, keep writing and doing a good job at it. I only saw one typo in this last one. "...but he couldn't just walk out without be dismissed." Should be "being dismissed." Nice job.

Update this some more XD it's a good story =D

Very nice story but uh i wish i knew more about this "Casey" erson sounds intresting... Anyways love the story so far keep it up =D

Ooh, I like this. I'm always interested in reading about what happened before games like this, keep up the awesome work!

Good job! And yay, it's fun knowing other people are doing interpretations surrounding the Great War crew.

except I FEEL BAD FOR YEAGER NOW :(