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mountainflower
2009-12-19 . chapter 49
It took me several days to read your story to this point, You have a very good story, one I would much love to finish. I hope you come back to it at some point to finish is.
vinaya
2009-12-19 . chapter 49
i love this piece of fiction.. pls do complete this.. it seriously is awesome.. i ve been reading this ever since u ve written.. its my fav..!! waiting to read the rest!
Melissa
2009-12-18 . chapter 49
I hope you are planning to update soon! I found this story years ago on Single Spark and was so glad to see that you posted it here and started updating again! Please, please finish this story!
enchanted nightingale
2009-12-11 . chapter 17
All Sesshomaru needs is a nurse's outfit ;)
enchanted nightingale
2009-12-11 . chapter 7
He cuddled with her! Naughty puppy ;)
enchanted nightingale
2009-12-11 . chapter 5
"Congratulations. You are the proud new keeper of a mass murdering injured Taiyoukai."

while I very much enjoyed the chapter as a whole this particular phrase was the best. Apparently both miko and youkai are very, very hard headed and stubborn.
Good, I need the laugh.
Great chapter.
enchanted nightingale
2009-12-11 . chapter 4
Kagoem needs to learn tact and Sesshomaru manners. :P
They are quite the pair...
enchanted nightingale
2009-12-11 . chapter 3
Hm, mothers do worry a lot.
And YES! Sesshomaru is awake. Kagome must deal with the grumpy puppy now. Can't wait to read the next chapter! :)
enchanted nightingale
2009-12-11 . chapter 2
Yes, Sesshomaru is like a big, fluffy puppy. I loved that bit with his tail, seems he likes this particular human well enough! ;)
Addict to Fanfics
2009-12-03 . chapter 49
wow read this ages ago on a-single-spark and was so disappointed about it not being continued past 40. I figured I'd look it up on here just to check and was pleasantly suprised to have another 9 chapters to go through. It's a great story and I really hope I don't have to wait so long this time for more to come. Please update soon it would be greatly appreciated. =)
Sincerely, Addict to Fanfics
DemonessKatana
2009-11-28 . chapter 49
PLEASSE!
UPDATE! ITS BEEN SO LONG!
I KEEP ON WAITING AND WAITING!
GlacialSwan
2009-11-16 . chapter 49
pls..pls..pls... update...update...update!... really love it...
ShindyNova
2009-10-11 . chapter 49
FLIPPIN' ADORABLE! Ugh, I can't even tell you how much I love this story, haha. I wish you would just e-mail me a hard copy of chapter 50. I don't even care if it's in random paragraphs that don't necessarily connect anything I just want the gist of what happens next! I love how accepting you made Sesshoumaru of his feelings for Kagome. It drives me NUTS when, for 37 chapters people write him in denial, and then KA-BOOM! He loves her! Stupid, stupid, stupid. lol. He is always written as an intelligent, calculating being, so it would only make sense that he accepts new emotions as they come. Thank you for being genuine with him! I'm not entirely sure what I think of Kagome thus far... She's kind of an idiot, hahaha. Is some parts she's completely adorable and pleasantly predictable but in others I find her almost unrealistic. If that's the correct phrasing. Although, on the other hand, I suppose that is what makes her so extraordinary... Yeah... never mind. She does suit the roll,haha. I especially liked the twist of the origins of the Well! Very clever. Also, I don't remember if I mentioned it earler, but THE single most endearing part of this story is when he massaged her back when it ached from her period. I swear I've never been so giddy while reading, in my life. Maybe it's because I have the same symptoms, hahahaha. Anyways, now I'm just babbling, but I enjoy your writing very much, and I home amidst all the school nonsense you are able to set aside due time for this story! Thank you for your dedication thus far and I look forward to the (hopefully) soon to come chapter!
ShindyNova
2009-10-09 . chapter 40
SOME OF THESE PARAGRAPHS ARE JUST TOO FREAKING CUTE! lol... I seriously have gotten giddy 2 or 3 times in the last couple chapters. When they were laying in bed together and in this chapter, when she mocks him and he smiles... HOLY crap, lol you know when you get so giddy and you kind of spazm/seize? lol that's what I've been doing... LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE this story
ShindyNova
2009-10-06 . chapter 6
You have a very interesting manner of writing. In the dialogue, there is an absolute British influence in your choice of vocabulary. That's how I'm reading it, anyways. As I read that over, it sounds like I'm telling you how you write, which isn't my intention. I only mean that the flow of you're writing is akin to how English folk speak. I like it. It's got a fun bounce to it, haha. The story is excellent and I very much appreciate the expansive vocab. Sometimes you get tired of hearing/reading things described with the same words over and over.
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