This was...too good. You had me crying at the end. Makes me love Avon even more. I love the way you use the dialogue from the original episodes and add in bits from other episodes. A great summary of everything that led up to the sad ending. Great stuff!

I don't really know what to say ... I am blown away. Wonderful, love the way you tied it into the last scene with the dialogue. Your explanation of what Avon was thinking at the time is great, as I said, wonderful!

Very good review - I like the way you took the dialogue from the original episode :)

Shows Avon's true nature (A genuinely human being who pretends to be a ruthless amoral fool).