It kinda ticks me off when people make me log on to review because my computer is about as slow as Finn's mental processes so I've got to sit here and wait when I could be writing about how awesome your fic is.

Anyway, this was really enjoyable. It was a little confusing there in the middle, but the later chapters made up for it. I'm looking forward to more from you and Lypix (which is an awesome name, by the way. How did you come up with it?)

To Terra Tropica!
It was a tad difficult to follow, but overall, I like this story, and yes, Cyclonis is sick. :D Blasted Cyclonians...