BRILLIANT!

Though I have never in my life even watched Samori Jack, this has got me hooked!
PLEASE CONTINUE!

Your story is headed on a decent start and plot so far! Please update as soon as you can! I like this!

Jack having horrible luck with women! I cannot agree with you more;) I have always thought about the same thing, haha.. I found your story interesting! I will be waiting for the next chapterX)
Sorry about the awkward English; I'm a foreigner who is just crazy about Jack...

WHOOPER!another chapter! awesome story telling, I cant wait for more!

very well done first chapter...i really have no constructive critisim. your writing fits samuari jack well...hope to see more in the future.