wow what a twist i hope you continue this in a series or something its a really good fanfic.

This story is a mary-sue. Why is 'Alethea' so perfect? How can she push over Arthur and have a better alertness than somebody trained to kill? Yoyu have also contradicted yourself in some : In one of the chapter's alethea saves Arthur's life by pushing him over so swiftly that he dodges an arrow. To push Arthur over she would have to be just as strong as he is. Which would mean she had a high muscle mass and high density. But in chapter 14 when arthur picks her up she is 'light'. How come it took Arthur such a quick time to fall in love with her. This is highly unrealistic.I'm sure that coming from another 'world' would count as she describes so vividly her home in Chapter 16, this would make her seem like some sort of soprceress, there is no way Arthur would see her as are also some cliches. Such as 'the name struck fear in their hearts.

These critisisms will hopefully help you to write better.

Amazing story you have portrayed arthur and merlin perfectly, and Alethea is a creative, original character. Thanks for a great read)

Well i finally found the time to finish your story and i would like to say good job. When i first started reading your story i found a lot of small mistakes especially with your grammer. Either you have found a good bata or you have improved greatly.
I love the concept of your story and your character development is good as well. I really like your oc she is great!

Well its time to start reading your sequal.

Ok first off i think that the idea for this story is really good. It hasn't been done so thats good. Now your grammer at certain points could be better. Also i think that Althena would be a bit more troubled by what has happened to her. I mean she is in a place that she does not know and is going to stand trial for a crime punishable by death, i know that i would freak out!
anyway im gonna go finish the story now... since im only on ch 8.

There is no way you can leave it there! i have enjoyed readying this so much and i hope you update or write a second story soon! a wonderful story like this cant end so soon x

no please don't even mention this ending! i can't bear to think that this wonderful story will end, i love reading it so much the whole modern girl going to Camlot idea is brillant i love the relationships you have created and its so well written with many twists and turns os please don't end it so soon, although i admit 30 chapters is long. anyay thank you for writing it and i hope you continue to update at least for a little while)

uh-oh, hopefully Arthur and Merlin will be able to tell it's not the real Alethea! look forward to the next chapter x

another nice twist.

fantastic chapter

aw, poor Arthur. its lovly we got to see his point of view aswell as Altheas, you really get a sence of how devestated he is. i hope you update soon i want to see how it all ends xx

this is very sad and i liked how you have written Alethea's departure from Arthurs view. i love your story, its got great flow and love your inturpretations of the characters, you have got Arthurs passion and Merlins kindness down to a art. i really do enjoy reading this and the only critism i can say is write longer chapters! really hope you update soon and hope Alethea does come back.

aww i feel so sorry for Arthur

aww she can't just leave them all can she?

brilliant chapter

aw, so sweet, cant wait to see what happens next, she cant just leave them all? please update soon x

a lovely set of chapters and im looking forward to when you update x