I enjoyed this story, and the theme of "lies and honesty" that encircles it. My only point of constructive criticism is that Iruka does come off as a bit "bratty" and illogical for lying all the time in chapter one. Of course, we understand his actions more through chapter two and three, but if you could infuse a little more of that understanding and empathy into chapter one, I think it would improve the mood of chapter one. Otherwise, it was a fun read.

Brilliant. An enjoyable read that leaves you feeling satisfied with its ending.

hahahaha. this is just damn too cute! I always love a jealous Iruka. hahahaha. Again just love it!

Very very sweet! I liked this a lot.

This was so sweet )

I enjoyed reading about how their relationship bloomed

D'aww

Awwwwwwwwwu.

Keep up the good work!

Angel

So fucking cute. Ah!

aw somehow i am sad..i want more...and a happy endng of iruka with his lovely kakashi...but no matter...i know kakashi loves iurka too...

AWw bX

So cute XD

*hugs*

Love, love, love it!

Lying Iruka makes me smile, for some reason, just as a truthful Kakashi makes me giggle :3

oh god, so cute

Beautiful... painful, as usual. You are one of the few authors that has a good grasp on the real Kakashi, the broken man underneath the underneath.

Aww. This made me tingle. So kawaii.

Thank you.

This story successfully made me turn into a pile of mush. But other than that–I think this is one of my most favourite characterizations of the two of them. It fit perfectly–great job! :D