 Goku's Daughter 1/17/12 . chapter 6lol! These one shots are great! Please do continue! |
 Kuu-sama 12/30/10 . chapter 6I love jealous Luffy!"Meat!" Luffy piped in her thoughts."Okay, that's a good start!" Nami encouraged him. "What else?
Luffy stared at her blankly. "That's it. Everything else is second.
They are so in character. You write Luffy so well. |
 The Flying Lion 10/1/10 . chapter 6pure genious. |
 Rizzz 10/1/10 . chapter 6I love it!
This is the first one shot I've read after reading Ch598 and somehow I kept imagining Luffy and Nami in their new appearances. Nami with gorgeous long hair and Luffy with his hot scar lol!
Love it! Good work! |
 Ace's Shadow Girl 9/29/10 . chapter 6Whoa I didn't know that could be so hot!
Umm, were his presents missing because he stole them before or because Sanji removed them?) |
 Ace's Shadow Girl 9/28/10 . chapter 5ohh cuuuteee! |
 Ace's Shadow Girl 9/28/10 . chapter 4hehehe, poor Luffy xD
I love Luffy logic ... it's so unbeatable ... |
 Ace's Shadow Girl 9/28/10 . chapter 2woohoo great one! |
 LuNa.strawhats 9/28/10 . chapter 4i do like but i didn't understand what was Luffy saying? You are writing very good...update soon xD |
 Butterfree 5/18/09 . chapter 3Excellent chapters so far
I love how your one-shots don't actually spring up and just have either Nami or Luffy just directly saying they love one another. You bring up a lot of varied moments that hint towards it instead, which makes the story much more canon-feeling. CupidKirby(TwisterKirby) |
 m o o g l e d a i m e 12/27/08 . chapter 2lol! |
 Alea Seikou 12/21/08 . chapter 3Cute. I liked J and I. |
 LuffyxRuby 11/1/08 . chapter 3LOL cute |
 alwayslost123 10/31/08 . chapter 3aw all three of them are so cute XD e!
poor luffy you should have known that in the beginning XD
wouldn't ace be okay with that since he is a fire user? i can't believe your jealous! and aww nami your so nice! luffy you better take care of that sweater XD
the 2nd and 3rd one are my faves XD but mostly the second one XD ace you gotta watch out! sniff your food before you eat it! XD update! |
 FirestormAngelBlaze 10/31/08 . chapter 3you know, i don't see why on earth you haven't got many reviews. But then again perhaps it would've been more conventional to haave done it in actual alphabeticalization. Just a hint.
Besides from that, this third chapter is easily the best thus far. It is rather adorable how you've portrayed Luffy's cluelessness and Nami's oblivious yet misunderstanding nature.
Poor Luffy. In one short chapter you've summed up their canon relationship if there was romantic frission too, of course. I really loved the last sentence, it just seemed too perfect . love is a lesson hard to learn!
The first chapters were not so to my preferal because long chapters just...i don't know but i just like them better. yet the lack of length was compensated with simplicity, denial and sweet emotion. But the uneveness of length in each chapter is rather inconsistent and well...not very appealing.
I'm sorry if that sounded rude but it's just how I feel. Good luck in writing more!
Ja Ne! :D
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