AWWWWWW I love this :3

I like how you portrayed Mello! My only complaint is that they get to choose their names, and I always thought it was sort of an alphabetical thing. But really, that's just opinion. And Mello choosing a name *was* cute. Overall, well done.

I like how you portrayed Mello! My only complaint is that they get to choose their names, and I always thought it was sort of an alphabetical thing. But really, that's just opinion. And Mello choosing a name *was* cute. Overall, well done.

loved it.

I like how you write witty, snarky L. Great job! _

YOU ARE AN AWESOME WRITER!

lol,i wouldnt mind if you continue this,thatd be awsome :3

Epic. Awesome. Fantastic.

But DAMMIT, L!1!

W0W.

Bravo, Bialy-san! XD I actually read this for numerous times before I write down this review. Just... this fic is so elegant and IC and deserves better treatment. Ah, I'm babbling without further ado, let's begin...

I really, really love the way you write L, Watari, Mello and Near. They are extremely adorable, and stay true to their nature. L's fond of Watari and vice versa. It's very nice, picturing they have moments beyond solving cases and such. Also, the contradicting arrival of Mello and Near! XD How fitting, Mello is more dramatic and unpredictable, while Near is calm and collected.

There are subleties and deep undertones here and there, what I love the most is brotherhood! LMelloNear. It's understable if L's instantly develop interest towards Mello. I always get the feeling that L is more open when he's with Mello, mostly after reading some pivotal parts of Another Note. Their bedroom-banter is priceless! 3 3 3

*sigh* I can't help but falling in love with MelloNear all over again and again as I read the final part. Those two are sleeping peacefully! XD L's thoughts about them being still children somehow make me sad, because it is right, they really are; but they must deal with difficult issues in the near future, especially after L's death.

Thank you for sharing this story, Bialy-san. Death Note fandom needs more good writers like you. Enough of plotless porn and OOC-ness, enough of those kind of garbage.

Ganbatte ne!

Regards,

SheilaLuv

L is very much in character, and somehow I've always thought he was more interested in Mello than Near.

Very well written. I like it a lot. :)

Brilliant awesome wonderful thrilling captivating funny and LOVE.

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I like this! Oh man do I ever. In-character, sweet, funny, and the way Mello comes up with his name is simply awesome.

Will definitely read more of your fics!

It's not fair, really. I'm putting this one in my favourites as well. My favourites will end up full with all of your stories if you keep writing like this, you know. So keep writing. Really, do keep writing because FFNet needs wonderful writers like you. Heck, I need to read all these good stuff you write!

I've never read a more realistic L or Watari before. That's almost like Ooba (or was it Ohba? o.o') wrote the dialogue, they are so in character that I can't really believe it. Or, well, I think I can't believe it but I do. Yup, weird, I know.

You have a way with words, they aren't forced upon, just so natural, like flowing, you know? Well, I can't really explain what I mean, but hey, English isn't my native language and I have a bit difficulty with words considering my lack of vocab no matter how hard I try so... Whatever. I'm rambling again. Just, as I mentioned before, you are awesome and keep going.

your devoted fan

nyxiee

P.S: How do you keep them in character? Honestly, is there some kind of secret that you're hiding from the world? Or are you actually Oba and we just don't know it yet?

O.O

Yup, that was random.

I know.

Just forget it.

How sweet! An interesting and refreshing perspective.

this has become one of my new favorite mello / near background stories.

especially for the:

'oh yeah?'

'yes.'

lines, those were so awesome and i could totally see little mello just yelling at L like that. thanks for writing this adorable and well executed fic.