I loved all the interesting directions Yon Rah could have taken in the first chapter.

The second chapter made me choke on my own laughter.

xD Do I sense an allusion to 'Princess Bride" in the first line?

Yeah, this is completely hilarious, but still really well written despite the cracky-ness of it.

Ooh, I like all the different situations you've portrayed here. I never imagined there being that many possibilities before.

I love them all, but the last is especially powerful - so short and simple, but it still portrays a lot of meaning and emotion.

Oh my! All of these are absolutely wonderful all of them were deeply profound and veryt believable and the final chpater made me laugh. Plot Twist!

Haha... Both chapters are intensely awesome. The first one was great, but the second one was just hilarious. Nice job, keep at it!

Oh wow. This was insanely hilarious and ironic to the extreme! I loved the ending, it made me laugh! As unrealistic as it was, I could practically imagine it happening!

Heh heh heh... Very nice. I like the dichotomy of taking five (very serious, very dramatic) stories... and then following them with something completely out of left field. It's a quite nice effect.

All the different potential takes were absorbing and highlighted different aspects of the characters--of what was and could have been. And the way you convey it all in so little words is very impressive.

And the last one? Hilarious, just hilarious.

That would have been HILARIUS!
lolz, Princess Bride ref!