Nice. It would have been nicer if it went longer but it's good. Seems a waste that Annie died for him then years later he kills himself. But it's good.

oh snap. i was so not expecting that. aw he misses her. good job

The sweetest fan fiction I have ever come across...I swear...please do write more of this!

Aww. I liked it! There's not many Invisible fanfics though.. yay he's gonna be with Annie know

holy crap! Im gonna cry! although I think its awesome still that he waited for annies little brother to stop depending on him. 100% sweet! hope you write more on invisable since its an awesome movie!