Wow. You have got Dean's character down pat. This was an incredible introspective, and really original- comparing the touch of an angel to the touch of his family members. Brava.

Wow, that was really deep. Just lovely. Nicely written. Well done.

That was amazing! WOW! I loved everything I can't choose a favourite part LOL. Very powerful writing and poignant, so true to Dean's character!

'wondering how something he barely remembers can haunt him so relentlessly' - beautiful and sad.

Brilliant!

Hugs and luv

Mish :)