this is realy funny i you have to wreit more on it and soon.
if the sprlling is wrong sorry

please write more please =)

Ooh, I like this.
It's very light-hearted, which is good.
& I like the way you're telling it as well with the little stage directiony-type things.
Hope to see more soon.

Tai's a trip.
Although i was wondering why tai would ask if kari thinks someone's 'hot'
just seemed a little weird, lol, even though he was teasing her

Nice start :)

OH MY GOSH
OH MY GOSH
OH MY GOSH
OH MY GOSH
OH MY GOSH
OH MY GOSH
OH MY GOSH
OH MY GOSH
OH MY GOSH
OH MY GOSH!

This. Is. H-I-L-A-R-I-O-U-S!!
OMG, I LOVE this *__*
THIS IS TOTALLY AWESOME! ^_^
And entertaining
And exciting
And interesting
And funny
And weird...
lol xD

The only thing I don't like about this story is that Kari didn't recognise TK >:(
That ** me off...
Some friend she is! PFFT!

Apart from that I like eventually everything about this ^_^ *gg*

Keep on writing ^_^

Uchiha-Kirara

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Ha ha, I just love it, All the characters are real funny, and especially Hikari! She first has a funny converse w/ Daisuke, them to Taichi, and then w/ TK! It made me laugh a lot, I hope for more of it! Although what I don't like it how there is no: Hikari:"hh"
Takeru:"tt"
i mean in the first chapter, i had no idea who was saying this that!
Overall, the plot is interesting, hoping for more!

Your story's going good ^^
I don't think that it's badly written, you've just written short sentences. Normally, I don't like those, because they tend to be poor and inconsistent. But yours are natural and fun to read. Drabbles, who doesn't love them? ^^

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Takeru being annoying is the best ^,^

I really like the way you've written this!

Awe update asap

XDD Ahahah, this is really cute and funny so far. Ahh, the nostalgia of this series. I love how you used dialogue-style between 2 or 3 characters so that it won't get too crowded to understand. I hope to see more of this soon.

Yo. *Waves*

I LOVED IT! KEEP WRITTING!

You have to answer like this everytime someone calls you "Tai is beyond great and since there is no word for beyond great we just call him Tai."
Haha! I love the sibling rivalry! Update soon!

Very nice ^^ The story's cute ^_^

The pacing is a bit fast but it's still good. I like Taichi in this one, the personality really suits him ü