lol mr dickweed nice one i should use that on my boss when i quit... the story so far is great i should keep reading...

yours truly


**juliet**

Whee!~~

Those are really great treats for the Halloween holiday. I loved your pieces that focused the lives of the Possible family. They were those things that happen to anyone, everyday and love the take on the Possible side of their experience even if it's as simple as your children getting sent to the Principal's office for causing troubles at school.

wow I really like this story so far andcant wait for an update so don't be long!

Interesting how this in the end turned out to be a story that was mostly about how *Kim* sees herself and how she interacts with the "grown-up" world. I can empathise with her. At nearly 35 years of age, I certainly don't feel like a "grown-up" either :)

My personal interpretation of Barkin is a lot more generous than yours, it seems. I see him as stuffy and overly rigid, but not actually a bad person. Nonetheless this was a fun tale. I especially liked Kasy's impetuous defense of her sister. That was cute :)

Man, posting all seven chapters in one hit? I enjoy the feedback process a bit too much to do it myself, I think. Plus I've gleaned some great inspiration from people's comments. But I guess whatever works for you.

I consciously thought I should stop and give some feedback here, since I'm nearly halfway through the story. The encounter with the Creeper was interesting (thank you for mentioning what it was ... I knew I'd seen something like it, but couldn't remember where ... now I know it was in movie trailers), particularly since it was quite a change of pace from what you normally do.

Prejudice, and how it will affect Kim and Shego's kids, is an interesting topic to cover. I look forward to reading the remaining chapters, and especially seeing how Barkin reacts to Kim and her partner.

The lack of editing showed in a number of places, working under a self-imposed deadline for posting makes that happen a lot.

Nice story. I was going to say that I saw few elements that reminded me of things I've written. And then I reflected, I also saw a couple plot elements I've planned to put in stories I have not written yet that could make you think I was borrowing from you when those stories come out. So I'll reflect, sadly, that this probably had nothing to do with me. I reflect sadly because it is a good story and I wouldn't mind influencing a good story.

Sorry, rambling badly here. A little ashamed of that fact. I was waiting for a story I liked to leave my five hundredth review for, and then when I find the one I want to leave review five hundred for I drivel and ramble away.

KiY

I'll leave you guessing how much I loved this story. I look forward to your next bit of 'who's writing this crap?' It's a fun little universe you play around with. This was a nice story. Thanks for a fun read. Hasta...

Yay Kim! Way to tell him off! This chapter made me grin! I'm happy that she told him off. Well, onto the next chapter. Hasta...

Well, I was going to say 'ouch' until Kim grew a spine there in the end and turned around and went right back into the principal's office. What an a$$ that man is! But, I do have to say, some of the things that the girls yammer about in school sure could get people into trouble. I mean, come on, "Momma threw Mommy over the sofa..."Mommy kicked Momma and hit her with a chair...Mommy was tied up during dinner." Their classmates must love when the twins decide to tell home stories! Still, gotta love the twins. They're cute, especially when Kasy just tells on herself; what is up with that? :) I'm still reading and loving it. Hasta...

Gotta love Kasy for being proud of the doing the wrong thing. Never dull moment in this little family, eh? I wonder how Kim will manage in talking with the principal. Is this the last we've heard about young Missy? Does Kasy get to 'sock her one' again? :) Moving on to the next chapter. I'm getting a kick out of this story. Hasta...

Oh, are the girls in big trouble? Still loving what you got going on here. The way you handle arguments with Kim and Shego are just as good as the way you handle funny moments with them. I likes it. :) Well, next chapter it is. Hasta...

I love these family moments that you write up. I like how it went from all silly and whatnot to Sheki bringing up something serious. It's nice to see Kim and Shego show their parenting skills. I wonder if we'll find out more about the twins' classmate Missy and what her problem is. Only one way to find out...onto the next chapter! Good work right here. Hasta...

Woo-hoo! You know I just about did a happy dance (not a pretty sight) when I saw this! As you well know, I enjoy your work and I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this story. So, very nice opening chapter and now I shall move onto the next one. :) Hasta...

Okay, now I've read it all. And it's all good.

Ok, didn't realize you'd posted all these chapters at once, will review fully after reading all.