 rainbabie 2009-11-17 . chapter 6OMG OMG. What a cliff hanger!! Can't wait for your next update!! |
 Mikel08 2009-11-16 . chapter 6VO1, your stories captivate me. Every time I stumble upon one I am enchanted by them, and can't stop reading until the end. Please, for my sanity, update soon! The character development is beyond brilliant. And Jesse, is by far one of the best. He reminds me of my friend Grant actually... But regardless please update before I die of anticipation! |
 Chios-gal 2009-11-16 . chapter 6This totally drew me in. Your version of the SM cast is just so fresh, unique, edgy and captivating that they draw you in and make it feel like your reading something totally new and from a completely different genre. Seriously, this would make a fantastic TV Drama. You'd make a great screen writer. This is exactly the kind of thing people would just dig on TV. Lovely writing style, funky dialogue, nice, balanced descriptions and a suitable setting that isn't outlandish all compliment the fantastic storyline and intriguing characters. This is excellent, so glad I started reading this and major look forward to the next update ;) |
 Norientra 2009-11-15 . chapter 6I so hope it's Kevin, Mina needs some talking to... |
 .x.Tohru.Seraphina.x. 2009-11-11 . chapter 6Loved it.
This is an amazing story which I can't wait to read more of.
Update soon.
- Seraphina |
 Snowtigress 2009-11-04 . chapter 6Now I totally and completely understand that it bugs the hell out of authors to ask for an update or when will there be an update but please for all that is good and holy in this world please do not leave it for months on end this time!
This ending was just cruel after the heartwrenching chapter and I want to know who it is at the door. I am saying its either Raye or Serena there to tell her to get over it. Yea it was a complete and total dumb thing to say but she has to know that he didn't mean it and if everyone of her friends is on his side about getting back together then she has to realize that he didn't mean it either. I don't think its Kevin cause it just seems like he doesn't have the balls to go get her back yet. And I want to know why Kevin never hang up the painting. I think he just didn't realize how important it was to her for him to hang it up.
This was such a great chapter! I loved the emotional rollercoaster Kevin is going through and the agony that Mina is going through. Though I don't get why she is still listening to Casey and not giving Kevin a chance to explain himself. For all that I love Mina I find her kinda weak in this story. Why would she put herself down all the time when she has such great friends and someone who loves her as much as Kevin does. I personally want to slap her and tell her to get over it and not to break up with him because all she is doing is running away and not even resolving the issue.
Poor hung over Kevin. Stupid stupid boy put his foot in his mouth and ate it.
Can't wait for the update!
Snowtigress |
 royan1985 2009-11-01 . chapter 6Hey there VO, another amazing chapter.
Hope there will be more soon. Thanks a lot! |
 ice dyaty 2009-10-30 . chapter 6I cannot wait until chapter 7 is up... |
 Girl Who Writes 2009-10-29 . chapter 6Reading this is like watching a mind-blowingly good tv show. I actually began protesting when Mina burned all of the drawings for Serena ^_^ I love this fic so much. |
 Spirit-hime 2009-10-26 . chapter 6Oh my gosh you once again just blow me away with your writing. Opening the chapter with the "guidelines to drinking alone," building up the suspense of what happened and just how horrid the fallout was, it's all just brilliant. You totally amaze me with your complex treatment of relationship issues and motivations and the many ways that people can ** up without ever actually meaning to.
Ho wow, CASEY. No wonder we hate Casey so much. What an unbelievable betrayal.
So many great one-liners, here. I also loved seeing so much screen time from the other characters. Oh Darien, I knew you had a heart somewhere in there. And Noah, you are like the Silent Bob of the Econ world in your hidden wisdom.
Such a heartbreaking ending, too. I wanted to reach through the screen and grab Mina before she could hurt the princesses. What about the children's book? What about Serena? Not the princesses!
You rock in so many ways, V. Thanks for continuing to bring us the awesome. |
 Jabba1 2009-10-26 . chapter 6Ack! Soo good!!
You captured everyone's emotions so well, it is almost beautiful.
Great job as always, I can't wait to see what happens next. |
 Charlie Chaplin 2 2009-10-26 . chapter 6You know I love this. Now I am going to tell you why. And Even if I've already told you, I'm going to tell you again.
-Because Kevin made a mistake.
-Because Kevin is desperately trying to correct said mistake.
-Because Kevin is endearingly human and flawed.
-Because Mina is being ridiculous about it, but you can't be angry at her since it's TOTALLY understandable why.
-Because Casey is a HUGE @$$h0le. But a completely believable one. Whom I hate with a vengence and who I hope accidentally marries and makes passionate love to a goat.
-Because my heart didn't stop beating at a mile a minute for at least fifteen minutes afterwards (did you expect me to say 'didn't stop beating a mile a minute until the end'? because it didn't. Once I got to the end it only SPED UP.)
-BECAUSE OF WHAT JASON IS PLANNING ON DOING!
-BECAUSE OF WHAT MINA DID!
-Because Rei is my hero in every way.
-Because Jesse is hilarious.
-Because Zach is also hilarious and he didn't even turn up.
-Because Priyam is hilarious.
-Because Darien is incredible.
-Because Mina's parents are adorable.
-Because the bromantic love between Kevin and Noah in that scene turned me to squishy, gooey mush.
-Because this chapter made me scream at least twice and sent me on emotional rollercoaster.
-Because you're totally awesome.
-Because despite the angst, it was still hilarious.
-Because of the little details like the cat not being there, the hair in the trash, the fridge humming, Darien being nervous because he didn't know what to do etc etc.
-Because of THAT LAST LINE.
Seriously. Best chapter ever. |
 15385bic 2009-10-26 . chapter 6no! i want an update - now ;P
well guess mina has every right to be angry but i guess kunzite is trying his best to say sorry if he's calling so often
keep it up :) |
 iluvboys 2009-10-26 . chapter 6OMG! I CANT BELIEVE U LEFT OFF HERE!
If you don't update in less than a week I'mna find you and lock you up with nothing but a computer that will only allow you to use microsoft word for 24 hours
=]]
But seriously, I can't wait for an update |
 DestinyManifested 2009-10-26 . chapter 6Of all the ** things Kevin could've said to her...wow. That's a douchemove. I'm not always a big believer in couple's needing to constantly talk out their feelings but I love the way that even their problems have subtext and that, of course, it all had to implode because they JUST WOULDN'T TALK! I mean damn! And seriously, someone needs to hamstring Casey, I vote Raye because Casey would sue Kevin if he lived. Actually, I vote Mina- may she manifest more of a spine and tell that dick off and then choke him with her pearls.
I'm alarmed by Kevin's drug use but that's just because his reaction every time he gets in a fight with her cannot be "pharmaceuticals yay!" or he's gonna be in rehab a lot.
This is my longwinded way of saying that this chapter kicked **, please keep them coming! |