you should write "next time" lol

Way too short. And just so you know, Slash refers to a fanfiction pairing that does not occur in the actual show/book. Slash isn't necessarily gay.

I really liked this.

most excellent!! altogether too short, though. i'm gonna go check out your liveournal acct now.

cute. =]

Very cute. It's short, but I really got the emotion behind it.
Good work!