Please update this story. Puh-lease! I really like your story... and it would be so cool if you updated. So pleasee update as soon as you can!

Please, please, PLEASE update again soon! I haven't been able to read for a while now, but I'm hooked again! I need my fix! LOL Inuyasha is probably my fav topic, with a close second being Labyrinth... And there's just not enough Inu to satisify! Not of this quality, anyway! I love your writing! I would give anything to be able to write the way you can!

“Anyway I can take it from here so Ban why don’t you take the boys to get cleaned up and I’m sure their hungry……”

^should be 'they're' instead of 'their' ~
~ they're- contraction of 'they are'
~ their- it belongs to them (possessive pronoun)

hey, it wasn't so long that i had to read the story over again to read the update so it's all good!

interesting reaction from yasha, very well described. one assumes they were close in the past.

great stuff, will be looking forward to the next update!

delighted,
ginny
♥

:@ wow, i did not see that coming. UPDATE!

I like where this story is going. I've been a fan of your work since Beloved and I love your stories. It's what keeps me going on and gives me inspiration to write one of my own, even though i can't put it on here yet because I don't have a computer of my own. But anyway, keep up the good work and I hope to see more soon. Until then, have a happy thanksgiving holiday and happiness to you and your family.
-Destiny's Diva :)

Excellent! I wasn't too sure about the setting being in pressent day, but it works so well! MORE! :D

love the story.

totemo ii !! (very good)
totemo (very)
ii (good)

watashi wa kore ga suki desu (I like this)
watashi (I)
kore (this)
suki (like)

update soon

action packed!

one could only think that the person yasha was getting all bothered over had to have been a female.

fascinating story. there are hints of a 'past' and one can't help but assume that the 'past' was the canon manga/anime in sengoku jidai? just a guess although i guess it could be anything.

wonderful story, eloquently written.

about my review from chapter one, it's your story, you do what you want. i'll cringe and change things in my head because it's such a good story i won't stop reading.

♥ a pleasure ♥
ginny

inu yasha-- if one goes by the order japanese put names, then 'yasha' would be his personal name and 'inu' would be the family or sire name. it does make sense since his father was 'inu no taisho'. i would imagine his brother would be 'inu sesshoumaru'. for his own brother, sister in law or father to call him 'inu' sounds a bit ridiculous. so does calling him 'dog'.
also, the erroneous misconception that 'yasha' has anything to do with 'female youkai'-- the characters for his name translate to:
yasha- (n) yaksha (Buddhist guardian deities sometimes depicted as supernatural warriors) (san: yaksa)
sorry, sorry. i'm a bit obsessive about the above and the wrongfully pluralizing japanese terms with 's'. japanese don't pluralize-- one kimono, many kimono. one hanyou, many hanyou. (something you did not do)
sorry, sorry! don't mean to spew, it's just that it's a well written and interesting piece. i just cringe when i see the above.

♣ thank you ♣
♥?
O.O;
ginny