I don't really undrstand this one. Does it mean that Asuka got whacked by both Rei and Shinji? You should have add an explanation at the end to clear things up.

Apt metaphors for the Children. I liked the description of their friends reactions to being knocked out of the game. Original. Made me think. I loved it.

Hmm, interesting.

Lovely.

This is the one you told me about, isn't it? The similes and metaphors make it an original. I always saw the opposing team as my prey, but you made them into wolves, dolls, and comets (just to show how unimaginative(sp?) I truly am). I love it!

I liked to hit the people as they were throwing balls at someone else. It's cheap but it works. Good fic with good detail but did Rei backstab Asuka? I didn't quite get that part. Peace...

YAY! 'S way good! *bows* I love it!

It took me a few seconds to figure out what was going on.

Is this saying Rei would turn on Asuka rather than face down Shinji?

Deep...

Original/Cool one-shot. -e2

Was I the only one who ever tried to hit girls in the legs instead of the face or body? Sheesh! I chivalry so dead? -_- LoL Nice story.

Finally a standered fic. Details well put out, thoughts greatly strung together. Couldn't see any spelling errors, grammar was good for the most part. Plot was good, very original, I give this a 6/10. The end of this fic confused me slightly, but other than that good work.

Very symbolical, really made me think...

Very original, and therfore in my opinion very good. I like the way you compared dogeball to a battlefield, as if the EVA children have become so immersed by fighting that they don't understand that dodgeball is really just a 'game'. I also like how it shows that they've seem to have lost their childhood in the process
Again, great fanfic!