Okay, INTRO:
Hi, I'm Danna... I read a lot of fanfic... I do pay attn to details, and I love a great plot. I can be very sarcastic and also very honest in my reviews. I hope you don't mind either. Sometimes they will be lengthy and just rambling and sometimes (esp if the story is good) they will be quick, so I can get on to the next chappy. I use a lot of my own words that don't make sense to many people, but I don't know how to express myself any other way, so please don't take offense to that. I also use a lot of profanity and vulgarity...I live in the proverbial gutter and push up for air every so often...
You were recommended by HunterHunting from CW&IA. Which I love and ADORE Tattward and Inkella...I heart those characters HARD!!

So with out any further A DO:
Chappy 1...I enjoyed. I like the switching of the POV during the chappy...I like having the plot being moved from person to person, I think you get to know all the characters better that way... so PROPS!!
It was a good chappy. I don't know much about the story, BUT I will be reading the next chappy so that's a good sign!
I'll give you more then...
Until then, thank you for writing this, and I'll be reviewing ;o)

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I really just wanted to give a quick review actually, which is more for the author than anyone else. I just wanted you to know that this story, is like totally and amazingly awesome! I love Twilight and the whole saga so much, I am a huge, and I really think your work is as good as, if not better than those books. I have read your book twice now, in the space of like 2 months and I only wish I had it in book form so it was easier to read! If I were you I would totally try to get this published! It is totally witty and funny and the right amount of angst, but more importantly for me, it wasn't too much on the m-rated side - just enough!

Thanks for your awesome writing and keep going!
Kat (UK)

This is an AMAZING story and I apologize for not reviewing sooner. But, I have been utterly absorbed in reading it! I think I had a mild panic attack with the last chapter. Here I am seeing that there is only one more chapter to go and than BANG! The house is destroyed, Edward was bitten. OMG! My heart is still racing. If not for your LiveJournal link I may have had my own psychotic event. Your characters are amazing and this is such a well put together plot. I cant wait to get to the next chapter. Thanks for sharing your creativity and taking the time to please us crazy fans =)

I so can't wait till you write more!

I have really enjoyed this so far...but time to get kids...

aw, he was sketching his girl!

Loving your story, had to review at the green toothbrush part. So cute. Back to reading for me.

Damn AG.

That was pretty powerful. I... um... kinda like dom Edward. Does that make me bad? *kicks a little rock with her patent leather shoe*

Seriously though, that was kind of fucked up. GREAT, without any fucking doubt, but kind of fucked up too. I totally get the explanation in your A/N and I was feeling the point of his desperation/domination during the scene.

Under any other circumstances I'd say it was just hot. But knowing that the characters are unraveling is very stressful to witness. I'm a parent and have seen three kids through high school so I don't condone this under most circumstances but I really wish they would just skip one day and go nap in the Volvo. It's breaking my heart.

I bet if they had this story to read they'd find it a lot easier to stay awake because I expect to be very tired tomorrow when I stay up all night reading again.

And you used my favorite insult! Asshat! I love it!

Finally finished the whole thing, I've spent the past three days basically ignoring my kids and staying up way too late reading. I LOVED IT! It was angst-a-licious... and very tearful. I think my two year old was wondering why mum was crying her eyes out at the computer!

aww I loved it =)

today i looked like bella. complete with the curls and the black hoodie. my friends told me so.

I was totally addicted to this story... I love the fact the fact you used some of the characteristics of the original characters to bring into a story... on top of that is was very "steamy"... thx

Have never left a review. Thought I would give my one and only, so here it is.
Absolutely the best story I have ever read.
Don't want Jesus to kill a kitten so I won't ask for a sequel.
The story is fantastic all by itself.
It doesn't need to go on forever.
Your characters have soul.
Love your Edward.
Hope Bella got him to really say those vows as she predicted them.
Just the best ever, nice to finally know the end.
Good luck in your other writing.
Bye.

OH MY GOD!
LOVING IT ALREADY;]
X

Oh.My.God.

I'll be in Jayne's bunk!