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Angelfirenze 6/17/11 . chapter 1
Okay, I don't remember writing that garbage at the bottom, but if I did, then I truly apologize. You were exercising flexibility in point of view and delving into a character most would be loath to do so, which is a good thing, not crazy.

I honestly don't remember writing that tripe but, if I did, then I was certainly the immature child it seems I was at the time. It shows in the lack of a log-in and, again, I do apologize.
WatsonandMary4ever 10/21/08 . chapter 1
A great story. Very good.
David Fishwick 4/6/08 . chapter 1
Cool story and i can imagine Holtz thinking this during Lullaby. So thanks for writing this.
DestinysKiss Too lazy to log in 3/6/03 . chapter 1
That was very well written. Congratulations, I know I am about a year or so late after you actually worte that, but still, well done.
All Mighty Terrestrial 1/23/02 . chapter 1
Cool drabble! This really sounds like Holtz.
Shadowfax 11/27/01 . chapter 1
Oooooooh... I was wondering what he was thinking. I think you hit the nail on the head. ]
keep it secret too lazy to log in p 11/22/01 . chapter 1
i would also like to contradict Angelfirenze's opinion by saying don't hate what you don't understand. the fact that this mans mind is so complicated and drucilla wrote a beautiful piece about it shows that dru has some incredible writing skills.
anyway, the fic was great because you got to hear all the thoughts of that man...all of the emotions and so on...i really liked it.
You-Know-Who 11/21/01 . chapter 1
Ooooo...very nice. So sad though...maybe he does need a hug. I wouldn't give him one but oh well. Your fan fiction does lend some sympathy to his character though and is well-written.
Seph Black 11/21/01 . chapter 1
A very good POV, i enjoyed it. It made that minute seem to last forever. Keep it up
Anerby 11/20/01 . chapter 1
To controdict Angelfirenze's review, he's not a "psycho"(what a cheap way to write someone off), he's a man, a very complicated and confused (confusing?) man, yes, and worthy to be looked into. Thanks for the fic, Dru.
Angelfirenze 11/20/01 . chapter 1
You need help, seriously. Who'd wanna spend a day inside the head of a hopelessly deranged vampire hunter who doesn't care one way or the other whether or not he hurts certain little baby boys when they kill their fathers? Not me. Anyway, a good look inside of that psycho's mind. &, again, seek help.:)
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