This was interesting, very good use of language.

TDH

Phanfic...I think that's the cleverest pun I've seen in awhile.

I really enjoyed this piece, even more so because the ending is so ambiguous. "There was no human, there was no monster. There was only Erik." Is he neither? Is he both? What is Erik...and could we ever possibly understand if we have to ask? The tone calms down at the ending as well, but is it one of hope, or only of waiting? Underneath the mask, the monster's face still lurks.

You used very powerful imagery with the shattered mirror and the blood. They stand out quite vividly. I only have one suggestion: you use actual twice in the fourth paragraph from the end. Repetition is a poetic device, and in shorter pieces or in close proximity repeated words generally take on a special significance. Actual carries no weight, and its stress seems a little odd. Is there a better word you could use?

My favorite line was "How the blood glistened!" This is so emotionally charged I found it breath taking. It was a bold move, and it works wonderfully in the tone of this piece without feeling forced.

This is really good. Love it. It's going on my faves.

This is sad, but really good. I love the concept.

Happy Halloween!

A very subtle and yet powerful piece. :D It just makes me want to give Erik a hug and take him home with me. :x

The face in the glass-less mirror was also a nice touch.

Nice job~

Cheddar Wolf