This is really sweet... I loved it. I usually don't like thing that are... whats the word... explicit? But this was very sweet. Great job.

Holy Smokes! So HOT!

Love this oneshot.

Oh man :(

Oy. That was... well, incredible.

Oh my God.
That was beautiful. Seriously. Please tell me this wasnt a one-shot. Amazing work. :)

Ahhh give more plzzzzzzzzz I am begging you. You are an amazayne writer. Continue with this story add on plzzzzzz I am begging I WANT to read MORE PLZZZZ

Oh my god :O

Please tell me that wasn't a one-shot?

oh my fucking god.

that was beautiful. like, truly.

authors never really give other authors their full opinion, because if it's bad they'll tell them so, but if it's really good, they'll tell you it's the worst thing ever out of jealousy.

i *wish* i could write as good as you do and this is like the best thing ever and i just sorta have to admit it and i'm going to go crawl back into my critical hole again and yeah .

WLAN u can't leave it that way dude continue

Ok so that was totally amazing! Jace pissed me off at the end but what's new? Umm just a word of caution, although your story was really good, it almost seemed something like a porno. I loved it, but it was a little intense

AHHHH CLARY! JACE! GAHHHH

Really great one-shot!

I love this pull-push relationship they have.

And you write them so well!

well damn. im definitely not a fan of your ending

So so so sad. It was so incredibly sweet and then ended so sad. What a fabulous story.