Hey, this was cool.
I'm a big fan of gargoyles! You should consider finishing this thing up, or at least continuing it.

Have a great day.

Well that was a great read! I haven’t read any Gargoyles Fan Fictions for a while. But I was interested to see your take on it. Very nicely done. Also I love your Labyrinth fan Fictions. I’ve been reading them for quiet some time now, and I think your a great author.

And your stopping there because...? Lol...Hope you continue this one.

I loved this story a lot! I think the conversation Elisa and Goliath had in the end was very true, and real to their realtionship! Great work Corrie!!!

I enjoyed this well-written Elisa/ Goliath fic. It captured Goliath's character perfectly. However, check your typing and spelling. It's distracting in quality work such as this to find typos and mispellings. Otherwise, you have a great piece of work here.