Wow. Intense, very interesting and VERY well written =D
Great job (: 'tis awsome.

cool

Excellent work. I really like all of your Eclaire fics.

Quite amazing, I must say. Nearly flawless characterisation and narrative. The pace and the intensity of the story were utterly perfect. I absolutelly loved it.

That was great, just how both characters were scared and vulnerable about all these things rising up inside of them that they didn't know were inside of them. Good job :)

Coolness. I love Elle and Claire together as a couple.

“I’ve never seen someone take that much and live,” Elle whispered intimately. “You really are something else.” Oh my God this is so perfect, so Ellen *-*

Great, great job. Love your writing PLEASE write more about them, you nailed their characterization...

aw, that was pretty!
omg, i loved that so much!

I totally loved this fanfic. I hope you'll make lots of other one-shots.

This was really nicely done. Your Elle was perfectly in character; perhaps a little less cocky, but that's to be expected, given what she's going through. I found it chilling when she told Claire that she really was something else. You captured Claire wonderfully as well, from her reactions and her wanting to help Elle, to remembering that she isn't quite right in the head.

Wow, that was actually amazing. :) I'm glad I read this. it's helped to reinforce my idea of writing an Eclair (or at least pushing my friend My Personal Rose into writing one, shes good with girlgirl pairings) just because it was great to read. Added to the Eclaire C2. :P

that was so gross and not worth posting up

I thought it was really good. Missed Elles cockiness a bit but I guess that was because she was in so much pain, right?
But very nice nevertheless!

This is excellent. :)