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Reviews for: A Trick That Isn't So Sweet
Gryffindor's Goddess
2009-08-14 . chapter 1
Really cute fic! Good job!
MythCreatorWriter
2008-11-01 . chapter 1
That was quite sweet. And I think it could happen too. You got Mokuba down pat, he's so cute. And you got Seto down pretty well too, I'm always impressed to see that. A lot of things he did seemed like him, though not all of it.

Yeah, Seto does keep a lot of things hidden, from others and even himself. I was very pleased to see Seto crying in his room, for two reasons. One: The great Seto Kaiba NEVER cries, in the entire series, the closest was the Noah arc. So it's sweet to see it, and see it done realisticly. Second: Seto would go by himself to not show weakness. He opens slightly more in front of some people, especially Mokuba, but mostly he keeps to himself.
Chikorita-Trainer1
2008-10-31 . chapter 1
Aw, that was super cute! Great job!
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