This is why I make a point of never posting on the same day I finish a story or chapter. A little shut eye, and a careful proofread can clear up a lot of problems that were missed while writing and often gives me the opportunity to make improvements.
Much better the second time around. I still think it could be developed a bit more. At the very least you could work in Raven's thoughts on Affection/Love. You don't need to settle the matter, just show that She's still thinking about her awakened aspect and what that part of herself revealed.
I know you want to be done with this story, but perhaps you could do an epilogue that has her aspects getting together to talk about what happened during the visit and what that may entail for future events? It would be interesting to see how Raven's aspects interact with each other when she's not around.

I hated to see this story end. It was a fun read and I enjoyed reading it. I hope you'll write "Behind the veil" it looks to be very promising. Finally, when reading your poll, I notice you have a lot of other TT stories, I'll be checking them out.

I don't think this story is done yet not all the questions have been answered

aw.i hate you now.but i still aprecciate the well written twist.

You're welcome. I do try to be as helpful as possible when I review and this story was an enjoyable read. Now on to the proof reading.
"as the spectral hand dropped her to the floor as way of exit from her mindscape" This feels off to me. Like there are words missing here or something. I'd also revise it so that you only use the word as once.
Also, the part where the door opens to reveal Beast Boy feels like you had two ideas for this part and put them both in without blending them together properly. Kinda put me in mind of a camera trick where the same scene is show from different camera angles. I don't think that trick works for writing though.
Otherwise, not a bad ending. I think it can be developed a bit more though. It feels a bit anticlimactic after the emotional chapter that came before it. Some indicator that she has at least started to accept her unlocked aspect would also be good.
Still, from a simple start has sprouted a truly clever story. I look forward to the next one.

This chapter was great. I liked the ending even though it was sad. Raven won't be able to deny Affection forever.

"But why would a simple child’s toy awaken the feeling of Affection, even if not Love?”" Your wording here feels wrong. Try replacing "even if not Love" with let alone Love.
Otherwise, a very good job. The sadness really works well for this chapter, and I can see why you didn't title this one the way you did the previous ones though I still think it needs a proper title. Will the next chapter be all the emotions coming together to help Raven deal with this revelation?
I knew when I read the first chapter that this could be an interesting story.

Well! A new chapter and a Latin Lesson! I enjoyed the chapter even though it only made me more curious about the source of Raven's problem.

Was the subtle pun in the disclaimer intentional?
"that as beside the point." I think you're missing a w here.
There probably is a Latin word for ball, or at least sphere. I'm not sure about super though. But, aside from Felinus domesticus, desmodius rotundus, and cogito ergo sune, my Latin is pretty weak. Heck, I'm not sure I spelled any of those correctly.
Still, very well done and the Latin was a nice touch. I'm assuming the other statues are totem animals of wisdom from other cultures. I wonder if anyone has told Raven what her totem animal represents in some Native American cultures?
Interesting that Wisdom is the only aspect who doesn't have the ball when Raven shows up. What aspect does Raven need to talk to about the ball? Innocence perhaps? Hopefully, we wont have to wait as long for the next chapter.

Wisdom could be portrayed as a being always deep in thought or studying something.Raven could find her pondering the ball. You did a good job with Timid.

"bleakly usual" Not sure if it's a typo but something about it just doesn't read right. Some spots where I'm not sure if it's Timid or Raven talking. Start a new paragraph when the speaker shifts. Also, there seem to be some actions missing. One minute the ball is on the rock, the next it's in Timid's hand. When did she pick it up? Also, I thought they were at a dead end. Where did the entrance come from? Were they walking as they talked, or did the maze shift around them?
I'm guessing that Rude is the aspect of Raven who burped in Nevermore.
Interesting addition. I get the feeling that Raven's aspects are conspiring together to teach her something and the ball is somehow a tool towards that end.
Don't beat yourself up too much about the delay between chapters. I'd rather you take your time on making the best story you can than post a rush job that isn't up to your usual quality. That being said, I'm glad to see this addition.
As for Wisdom's realm, I know the owl isn't Raven's totem, but it is a traditional symbol for wisdom. Some Tibetan and/or Greek symbolism and a few Confucius sayings would work too. Also, Wisdom could be a wise guy. I'm not saying you should make her goofy, but deadpan humor would be fun. A few jokes in an ancient language and a moderate number of mind games and Wisdom's realm could really be annoying for Raven.

Guilt usually helps, yes. And people aren't willing to guilt you, so you need to remind yourself sometimes ;)

And this was a really cute chapter. Easy to make it cute with Timid really. :) heehee.

Still, always good seeing more. Looking forward to the next chapter. As for Wisdom's realm... hrm. Not sure. I'd have to think on that one.

Please continue to update!

I'm not sure what the difference is between Knowledge and Wisdom would be, at least as far as their appearances go. Perhaps you should still do Wisdom to show how they are different?
What does Knowledge's realm look like?
I look forward to your next post.

I like the way you wrote knowledge's part in this chapter.