DUDE THAT WAS AWESOME! SLAP LYLE DYLANDY IN THE FACE! NO PUNCH HIM IN THE FACE!

Great one-shot

hmm..ok I guess

Poor Feldt, must be hard with Lyle around. Well written,

Call my name three times when looking into a mirror and I shall appear...

Mentioning me in author's notes works too ;) I shall be writing my own version of a similar event eventually. Look forward to it.

As for your story, it was lovely. I think all fanfiction involves a certainly level of OOCness, but there's nothing wrong with that. You keep it at a level that is still believable. Keep up the good work.

Wow! That's easy... The cleansing part, that is... If only everything is taken care of that efficiently...